I thought this was a good story and could have developed into a great one given the chance but as it was, it's too short to have a big opinion on. The only thing I had a problem with besides how short it was, was the constant use of 'Cousin'. Cousin Dan, Cousin Jake, Cousin Dan, Cousin Jake. It just got a bit annoying, imo.
Other than that, if you don't have a problem with kissing cousins and only have a few minutes to spare, it's good enough to pass the time. :D