I liked this one. It was sweet and I just loved it when Ned or Oliver would talk about the 'electric melty tingles'. It was just so cute. While I did like it, I think I would have enjoyed it more if there had been more details on what happened during the years they were apart. Those twelve years are just glossed over in one chapter and I would have liked more details about what happened and not just the vaguest basic ones. Even though they didn't see each other during that time, I think I still would have preferred to see what they went through and seen how they kept track of each others lives through their Ned's family.
The blurb is slightly misleading. It makes the story seem more suspenseful and have more things happen in it than what really happens. Some of the things it says happen fall under the twelve years that are glossed over so we don't really get to experience the full glory of the coming out this story is supposed to represent. As it was, like I said, it just gives the basic explanation of it. :-/
This is a short story, however, so I didn't feel like it reached it's best potential and I felt like we were missing half the story but it still left me with a smile on my face at the end. So, overall, it was good. Recommended.
