This story started off very good for me and I really like the concept of the story. I was really enjoying it but not far into the story, the kid, Bianca, started to grate on my nerves. For a ten year old, she is very, very mature (I'm talking late teens mature) but not only that, she couldn't stop interfering and I found that really annoying.
When Gavin and Curtis finally got together, however, I really enjoyed it! They were definitely hot and I did enjoy the smack upside the head Curtis pretty much endured when he accepted his feelings for Gavin. I only wish the story featured less of Bianca and more of Curtis and Gavin together.