Beyond that, this was such a cleverly done read. A cookie turning into a man?? Who would have thought! Rudy sure didn't! I loved his reactions to the cookie and how, at first, he couldn't stop staring and pretty much freaked out when it started to change. I loved the whole concept but I really wished it had been longer so we could see what Rudy does with Jack and how Jack copes with everything. Very interesting story, though!