My only problem was the length. It really should have been longer - novella size at least - because there were huge chunks of time missing that I'd have liked to see. Also, I would have liked the conflict and resolution to be more developed, whereas in the story it is over and done with very fast. The last chapter, however, left me feeling like it didn't fit the story because a lot happened between the between the ending of the second to last chapter and the beginning of the last chapter that we don't know about so I was confused and questioned how it all happened and how they go to that point. Still, a very nice read. It left me with a smile and the warm and fuzzies.