I liked this story because it was so easy to read. The premise is good, if a little cliched but I'm a sucker for stories like these so I really enjoyed it. However, while I liked it there isn't much depth to the story or the characters. We get the bare bones of both Dax and Lance so I didn't feel a real connection to them. I also felt like it needed more editing. Some of the sentences were confusing because of the overuse of pronouns and I noticed once or twice that the characters names were spelled wrong.
Overall, an okay read but I would have enjoyed it more if there was more meat to the book. As it is, it felt more like one step above an outline than an actual story.